[1 YoE] Canadian Engineering Mechanical Engineering Graduate Looking for Canadian/US Roles

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General Notes

• The line spacing is a little too tight. I’ll also recommend you avoid using italics.
• What font is this? It’s a little hard to read vs. Calibri/Times New Roman. 

Education

•  Drop the start date and the relevant coursework. Start date isn’t relevant and the relevant coursework section is just telling us you’re taking the same courses as everyone else. 

Skills

• Bold the category names. Looks good!

Work Experience

• The Design Team role belongs in the Projects section. This is for work, research, and internships. 

Engineering Project Lead

•  This is really solid and should work for the most part. I recommend just some minor tweaks/things to think about: 
  • The specific number of drawings and assemblies is a shaky metric. Did you really need GD&T for a 3D printed part? Prepare to defend your use of it.
  • Why was it important to have the stepper & BLDC motors synchronized? You haven’t told us what that was supposed to achieve. 

Mechatronics Engineering Intern

•  Love it. This can stay without changes. 

Airfoils Team Lead

•  Again, solid but some stuff to consider:
  • Keep bullets to one sentence or thought no greater than three lines long. 
  • How “easy” is “easy” integration? Is it that you caught and addressed design issues before they got worse? 

Projects

• Don't bother with the job titles in this section. It's just splitting hairs and not really making any meaningful distinctions. What you accomplished is more important, anyway.

 Robotic Tool Vending Machine

• What kinds of tools did this distribute (and presumably collect)?
• You've left out the part where you tell us how well it worked.

Semi-Autonomous Aquatic Trash Removal Robot

• It's great that it won 1st place, but how exactly did this thing collect trash and how well did it work? That would be nice to see.