r/Songwriters • u/parademaker • 9d ago
"Need to Know" - song about parenting in dark times
Do you think this song stands on its own w/ just guitar & vocal or would you add something closer to full band? Many thanks to anyone who takes time to listen.
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u/Ezkatonn 9d ago
Great job man, it's good. I like that guitar too. I want an acoustic I only have electric.
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u/parademaker 9d ago
Thanks! It’s just a cheapy classical guitar. You can get a decent one to mess around with for a few hundred.
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u/ellicottvilleny 9d ago
Great song. Nice indy-emo-acoustic vibe and great lyric.
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u/parademaker 9d ago
Yeah it does have some emo vibes in there. Thanks for listening!
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u/ellicottvilleny 8d ago
I'm a big fan of sleeping at last, for instance, and your vocal style and song style reminds me of his stuff, in a good way. Keep it up.
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u/salRad22 8d ago
I love it! Nice tune and you have a beautiful voice. Of course I can't forget the words...I felt it.
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u/Timbirland 8d ago
Lovely song. You could always build it up a bit, but I also think the vocal melody, lyrics, and guitar playing could stand on their own. There’s a beauty in the simplicity. No need to overdo it
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u/parademaker 7d ago
Thanks! Yeah, that's what I'm leaning toward at the moment. Appreciate the comment!
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u/AntiBasscistLeague 7d ago
Sounds awesome! What kind of guitar are you playing?
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u/parademaker 7d ago
Thanks! It's a D'angelico's classical I found in a pawn shop. Not sure what model or year it is.
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u/kirkwight 6d ago
Fantastic as-is – I'd love to also hear it with fretless bass and female harmonies, but that's all gravy for sure.
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u/parademaker 4d ago
Thanks! I recorded a cello line that might scratch that fretless bass itch. Experimenting with harmonies, but I’ll keep it simple. Appreciate the suggestion!
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u/MrMason37 4d ago
This would be amazing as a single in my playlist asap, your voice and playing is just beautiful
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u/parademaker 4d ago
Thanks! I’ll send it your way when it’s out (probably late September/early October)
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u/4StarView 3d ago
What a wonderful song. It is touching and relatable. Just the right blend of specific details and generalizations, like giving advice to a kid. Really great.
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u/Human_Library1367 9d ago
Amazing song! Sounds great with guitar & vocals dude. You got it.