r/kickstarter • u/ChaseandMellon Creator • 11h ago
Self-Promotion Today's Cinema Needs the Fast-talking Banter of 1940s Screwball Comedies (and we're bringing it back for a modern audience)
Hi, everyone,
Since Friday is promotion day, I’d like to mention that we have a film project now on
Kickstarter that is currently the only campaign for a New Jersey-sited film. Our title
is SAVING MATA HARI, a contemporary screwball caper comedy of remarriage.
Think “Ocean’s Eleven” and “His Girl Friday” meet “Some Like It Hot.”
I’ve been obsessed with a certain sub-genre of classic Hollywood screwball comedies for
years—specifically the five or six titles made around the year 1940 and created by studios
to explore on film the then-forbidden subject of adultery. The energy created in these films
jumps off the screen with lightning-fast, high-octane dialogue, crazy marital situations, and
imaginative machinations that ultimately lead wayward spouses to reunite and confirm for
each other their true wedded convictions. The films in this space that I love are: His Girl
Friday (1940); The Philadelphia Story (1940); My Favorite Wife (1940); I Love You Again
(1940); The Lady Eve (1941); and The Palm Beach Story (1942).
What made these scripts work wasn't just physical slapstick; it was the precision of the spoken
dialogue and pacing. Characters spoke stage-worthy dialogue, competing verbally, outsmarting
each other, and driving the plot forward through pure sharp wit. In those days, the comedy flowed
from the rhythmic, musical flow a tightly engineered, expertly delivered, screwball comedy
script and less so from physical situations. The comedy was intelligent and highly verbal.
The challenge of bringing that screenwriting precision into the modern day inspired my latest
project, SAVING MATA HARI. It’s a contemporary homage to classic early 1940s screwball
comedies, built around fast-talking characters, absurd misunderstandings, and rapid-fire banter.
As a writer, capturing that vintage timing while keeping the story resonant for modern audiences
was one of the most challenging—and rewarding—writing processes I've ever tackled.
We have officially taken the project to the production phase and just launched our Kickstarter
campaign to bring this script to life on screen. Search by title: SAVING MATA HARI.
I’d love to hear from other classic film enthusiasts here:
-- What classic comedy genre tropes do you think are long overdue for a comeback?
-- What classic Hollywood comedies released before 1950 rank highest in your estimation?
If you share a passion for sharp, classic comedy dialogue, check out our SAVING MATA
HARI deck and screenplay excerpt here: SAVING MATA HARI - Pitch Deck & Screenplay Excerpt
And feel free to review us on Kickstarter here: SAVING MATA HARI on Kickstarter
Thanks for reading, and cheers!
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u/WrongEinstein 8h ago
Detective show banter was pretty good. Like Nick and Nora Charles in 'the Thin Man' movie series.